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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 3, 2013 10:25:31 GMT -8
Hi everybody! I have a forum, and want to know if I can change anything to it.
DFRPG is a roleplay about the book Divergent by Veronica Roth. There is a new plot, and everything. We have a few interesting points of view. One from the main group, the other from the people that want to destroy existence of the main group. The written roleplay is about rebels trying to gain rights they deserve. I don't really know much about coding, but I've tried my best to arrange it well.
Please go here, and tell me any opinions.
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 7, 2013 12:02:47 GMT -8
pou...PLEASE LOOK AT OUR SITE!
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 7, 2013 18:00:54 GMT -8
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 10, 2013 18:18:32 GMT -8
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 11, 2013 12:10:24 GMT -8
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Post by Thomas on Jun 12, 2013 9:51:05 GMT -8
red colour is to dark and change the colour of the text
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 12, 2013 9:54:24 GMT -8
Mkay...to what? The theme idea is pretty dark...
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Post by Thomas on Jun 12, 2013 10:03:13 GMT -8
And forum is a pit mess
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Post by Thomas on Jun 12, 2013 10:04:20 GMT -8
your forum should be much if you v5
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 12, 2013 10:46:27 GMT -8
I tried my best. It's my first site, so for me, It looked pretty good. I don't really know that much coding, so...
what you you mean, if i v5? I have the Proboards v5.
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Post by Thomas on Jun 12, 2013 21:19:08 GMT -8
I can help you get started
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Post by ???????????????? on Jun 13, 2013 6:03:45 GMT -8
With coding? I actually like my theme as it is, so I don't want to mess with that as much, but I'd love to get help with other things.  |
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Working on the site :)
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Post by R A Y N E ! on Jun 13, 2013 6:25:01 GMT -8
Appearance 3/10
The site colors kind of clash. I like the background that you used and it seems very relevant to the plot, but the red title bars contrast heavily with the cyan that you have used for the borders of the forum. I believe the gray fits, but perhaps you could use black for the borders and a darker color for the title bars? Just a suggestion. Your quick links should bring you directly to the page that you want to lead them to because I felt lost and confused while trying to navigate and finding what I should look at first. If I was going to join it should be easy to find what I should be looking at first.
Content 6/10
The actual plot is actually very interesting. I have not read the book that this site is based off of, but from what I can tell it makes me very curious which is good for potential rpers. What did turn me off though is your improper grammar and punctuation. The first sentence in "A Proper Introduction" made me not want even to continue to read it anymore. I would go back through your pages and re-read them all in reverse to double check how they sound. You also went crazy with commas. There are wayyy too many in most of your sentences. Also, the plot seems to be more based off of one character. Is it from the book? If it is, I would seriously consider modifying it. If not, then make it address the audience that might be reading it. Your last line does just that, but the rest is irrelevant to a person that might want to join that has not read the book.
Perhaps you can put in some kind of board that shows what happened in the series so us non-readers aren't left looking stupid because we don't know what you are talking about in this place.
Overall 4.5/10
Overall, I was very lost and confused by your board. I was not quite sure where to start and when I did start reading I was immediately turned off by the incorrect grammar, overuse of commas, and the unclear plot. I did not read the books that this board is based off of so I had absolutely NO IDEA what you were talking about most of the time. Keep in mind, you want to attract people that have both read the series and that have not read the series so you can keep the plot interesting and have people create new characters.
Hope this review was helpful! Good luck!
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