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Post by Beyonder on Sept 23, 2014 16:29:33 GMT -8
Roleplay points!
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guardianangel1438
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Sept 23, 2014 18:41:37 GMT -8
Thanks Hagoromo
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Post by MissNK on Sept 24, 2014 2:01:11 GMT -8
LayoutProbably the first thing I notice about a good layout is the excellent colour-scheme. Yours is a bit blinding, I guess. This might sound a bit confusing as you are using a very dark colour-scheme. However, because the reds in your background are so bright, it is quite tiring to look at. Your text-colour is over all a bit better, but not perfect. I would advise you to find a shade of red which is less bright. You could use your left-wing of your header-picture as reference. Examples are #801216, #6c1d20, #520e0e and #4e1516. If you would like to learn something more about colour-schemes, you could take a look at this tutorial. That being said, I adore your nav-bar! The purple-red colour is great (#240a13 and #4f363e), I love the way it is centred and how the hover works. For me, it is perfect. As for your header: I think the picture is very pretty, the colour of the text is all right (gives a nice contrast to all the black), but I don't like the font. Perhaps you could choose something more personal / less default? ( Dafont could be a great inspiration.) For your boards / categories / etc: I am also not sure about this colour-scheme. It just doesn't fit neatly together; I think it wouldn't hurt to give it some second thoughts and try some different colours (perhaps on a test-theme?). Also, I think your board-names should be readable when you hover it. Currently this isn't the case. ContentsPlot: a summary! I love summaries! When I have to work through pages and pages of story it almost always seems as too much effort and I won't even start. So, a summary is great. Well done. The story itself is plain and clear and I like the twist at the end. The thing with the kids is original and it is giving your site a good foundation (in my opinion at least). Rules: they are not visible for guests? I think this is quite a no-go. I want to know what I sign up to, before I sign up to it Character creations: personally I should move this board closer upon the RP-boards, as it is somewhere between in game en out of character. You could also consider to extend your character description example. Although this is quite up to your own preferences. Roll Playing boards: I would say the number is fine. You could always make more boards when you have more members. Personally I prefer a RP with 4 boards and 20 threads in all of them above a forum with 20 boards and 4 thread per board. ConclusionLike being said before: I think you got a forum with a great potential and quite a nice story. You still have some work to do with the layout, but nothing you can't manage. Take your time to experiment and find out what does and doesn't work. I am sure you will do a great job in time!
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guardianangel1438
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Sept 24, 2014 2:19:17 GMT -8
Thanks a lot MissNK. Yeah, I know my color scheme still needs a little work. It's been difficult. But I didn't know about the rules thing, I will have to check that out and see whats up with that.
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Post by MissNK on Sept 24, 2014 2:59:50 GMT -8
Picking the right colours can be quite a challenge, no doubt. This is an other tutorial, which happen to be one of my favourites about colouring. It shows quite clearly how and why you should pick certain colours. As for the rules: when I click on the link on the left, I get an error saying I have no permission to access the board
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Post by Beyonder on Sept 24, 2014 5:06:58 GMT -8
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Sept 24, 2014 17:15:05 GMT -8
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Sept 26, 2014 18:59:11 GMT -8
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Sept 27, 2014 14:28:10 GMT -8
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Post by guardianangel1438 on Oct 1, 2014 16:11:20 GMT -8
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