The Wolves of the Beyond

[CJ]

The Wolves of the Beyond

This is RP forum based on the series by Kathryn Lasky: The Wolves of the Beyond, and parts added in from the series Warriors by Erin Hunter. I'm just looking for a little feedback!

Thanks in advance! 

[peggie]

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Feb 13, 2015 13:11:57 GMT -8 peggie said:

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Hi

Please check the rules of each board, prior to posting.

Thanks.

[URBAN]

Hello there CJ (not sure if you still wanted a review or not, but I'm bored so im going to write one anyway >

FIRST IMPRESSIONS
First and foremost your site is orginized and easy to navigate which is one of the best things it can be, guests and new members should have no problem finding their ways around the site!

I did notice some things you could change layout wise that would help though. First off, as it is right now your boards look a bit crushed. I think that changing the width of your forum should fix this, though if you don't want to do that, I definite recommend using a board remodel to strip out the extra, unneeded, stuff in the structure of your boards (you can get rid of the board name row, drop the topics/posts column, and lose the old/new icon columns as well). Once you do that I think it will really help your forum look less squished and much cleaner.

The next thing that caught my attention were your images. Mainly your banner and your forum background. Both are nice, but really have little to do theme wise with each other and really don't match your overall theme colors either. Also (relating to your forum looking thin) the text on your banner is cut off, which makes it look a bit wonky. Your background has a similar problem in the fac t that it repeats vertically, which really doesn't do the image justice, perhaps find a larger image and use that instead.

Now I wanna talk about the theme overall. Your theme isn't bad, the colors work okay together. But it does come off a bit "stagnant" (if you will). There isn't a lot of debth to it. You could change this by using a light brown for the text, along with the brown board background, and then add a boarder around the forum that is yet another shade of brown. This will also help tie the parts of your forum together (your side tables, banner, etc.). On the same note (relating to the over a theme), as I said above, the background image and the banner you've chosen to use are nice, but they don't really match each other or the site. Perhaps edit them or, for instance, you could replace the red you've put I the theme with the same orange you've put in the banner. That would help blend the theme further.

LOOKING DEEPER
Your site rules and other basic information like that are well written and easy to find. Your plot is unique and interesting; however, it does have some awkward language in it "So a long time ago," as an example would sound better as long ago or A very long time ago. I recommend rereading it and maybe having someone else reread it to catch small things like that. They aren't a big deal, but I thought i d point them out XD

ALL IN ALL
Though your site needs a little improvement here and there, its indeed well made, you did a great job, keep it up!
6.5/10