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[alarice]

curseofthebeast.proboards.com/

Trying to get on our feet still, any good opinions?

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Hello there alarice ,
FIRST IMPRESSIONS:
First and foremost let me just say that I actually love your banner, it looks really cool and is pretty different from anything else I've seen lately. The layout of your site is very neat and orginized and easy to navigate through, I found all important information easily. You did a good job!

However, as well as the colors work together in your site banner, for some reason they're really hard on the eyes for the boards. I think that it may just be that you used a bit to much of the white, perhaps change the border color to match he background and make the text color a light gray (keeping only the links the white), that should fix it. Or, if it doesnt, you could considure using all the same colors but flipping how you use them (the lighter colors would become the BG colors and the blues would become the accenting colors), that could also fix the issue and still keep the site blended with the banner.

Another small thing I noticed is that your banner seems a bit to high up, the large amount of space between it and the forum kind of makes the layout a bit wonkey, perhaps find a way to move it down a bit.

LOOKING DEEPER:
I really enjoy your plot, its one of the more unique ones I've seen lately. However, I do think that I could use a bit of work. All the information is there, but I think that its a bit jumbled and even repetitive in places (like info that should have gone in the first paragraph was moved to the second). Perhaps tweek it a bit to make it flow a bit better.

Other than that, I don't see any other improvements

ALL IN ALL:
I think your sites eye-catching and unique, nice work!
7/10

[alarice]

Thank you I'll work on this stuff

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Feb 25, 2015 17:26:34 GMT -8 alarice said:

Thank you I'll work on this stuff

You're very welcome!
You're welcome to tag me in this thread or even send me a pm if you revamp it, idI'd be happy to write another "review" lol XD

[alarice]

I appreciate constructive criticism I'll deff do this

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Feb 25, 2015 17:49:33 GMT -8 alarice said:

I appreciate constructive criticism I'll deff do this

Very cool, I loom forward to it