Time Flies ~ disney fairies rpg BRAND NEW SITE

[LINDSEY]

BRAND NEW SITE!!! timeflies.boards.net/

Yes, I understand graphics sucks and it is VERY simple.

What do I want Opinions on? Content mostly. I am looking for any suggestions on my information post and such. I tried to keep it simple. Being that we are dealing with a disney themed RPG, I didn't want to over complicate things. If you see a mistake, please point it out with a link to the page. THANK YOU IN ADVANCE!

Rating would be nice! 1-5 Stars Please (5 Being the Best)

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Hello LINDSEY, I am Sarapha, a friendly reviewer of forums. The way that I review a board is that I look it over as a guest, and write down what I see, in the order I see it. Then, I take another look, and see what details can be tweaked. I have 8+ years of experience with Proboards and its glory. Let us start

First Glance
Nice layout, colors don't hurt my eyes, nothing too distracting that I can't focus on the page. Nicely done.

Continuing on...
The second thing I notice is a lot of empty boards with the RPG area. The biggest turn off to a site that I've seen so far in all my years of reviewing is a site with empty boards. Potential members want to see a site brimming with life, and see a lot of areas that they can jump in and emerge themselves. Empty boards stand to reason that either the site is very new, or the site is close to dying out. (Specific boards; Winter Woods, Neverland, the Mainland)

Spelling Errors on Main Page
I detail these out because it is very important to new members to know that the admin is thorough with the site
-Spring Valley board, 'their are' should be 'there are'.
-Summer Glade; 'It is known for it's' should be 'its'
-Winter Woods; 'As long as their wings are save' <-- Doesn't make sense... Maybe meant to say 'safe'
-The Mainland; 'this place is full of dangerous', I believe should have been danger.
-The past Board; 'character's, should be characters.
-The Archives; "Only threads that are six months old will also go here" should have the 'Only' removed.

The Rules
I have to admit, the Rules were tricky to find. Usually, it is one of the first things that people seek out, I would definitely suggest bringing some sort of attention to it, whether to make it a thread all its own, or something along those lines.

Within the Welcome and Information section, there are more grammatical errors. "but if your just stopping by", in this case, would have the conjunction of 'you' and 'are', which would be 'you're'. Your shows ownership. 'Your character' 'You're applying'. 'Inactive' is also one word.

Site Plot
I did come to question why the Site Plot had its own board when it only contains one thread. My suggestion for that would be to move the single thread into the Information board, then delete the sub board. Unless you have plans to add additional threads to that board, of course.

The plot itself is nice, the second post that was 20 hours ago. The first one posted was very vague, and general. Didn't really speak much of a plot, just pretty much told everyone to do their own thing. The second post, I like very much, but I feel would be better if it was incorporated into the first post, so it looks like one seamless plot.

Unfortunately, I don't have a grading scale of 1-5, so I will be unable to help on that base. Good luck!!

[LINDSEY]

Hello :~:Sarapha:~:, Thanks for coming over to review my board. If you want to rate on a 1-10 scales, that is completely fine. I was gonna do a thing on the board to show our ratings from Support and was gonna do some star graphics. It was gonna be later on, but that was an idea I had.

I'm happy you like the graphics. I was scared they wouldn't be liked at all.

I'll have to make another character or something so I can fill up the boards. The only reason I hadn't been able to fill it up is because it is just me. Trying hard to actual fill it, but it is tougher then that. I will def. try though, maybe a mainland one or a Neverland one. Thank You!

I went and grabbed all the errors. That was always my downfall. Thank You!

I made the rules an Announcement and changed the name to catch other's attentions. And I fixed the grammar you pointed out.

The Original plan of site plot is to leave original threads and start new ones when need be. Right now, the plan hasn't been put into motion. And the reason for the 'new post' is because the first one is to just give an idea of the site. The second plot is to give off a sub-plot that people can come into.

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[:~:Sarapha:~:]

May 3, 2015 9:27:03 GMT -8 LINDSEY said:

Hello :~:Sarapha:~:, Thanks for coming over to review my board. If you want to rate on a 1-10 scales, that is completely fine. I was gonna do a thing on the board to show our ratings from Support and was gonna do some star graphics. It was gonna be later on, but that was an idea I had.

I'm happy you like the graphics. I was scared they wouldn't be liked at all.

I'll have to make another character or something so I can fill up the boards. The only reason I hadn't been able to fill it up is because it is just me. Trying hard to actual fill it, but it is tougher then that. I will def. try though, maybe a mainland one or a Neverland one. Thank You!

I went and grabbed all the errors. That was always my downfall. Thank You!

I made the rules an Announcement and changed the name to catch other's attentions. And I fixed the grammar you pointed out.

The Original plan of site plot is to leave original threads and start new ones when need be. Right now, the plan hasn't been put into motion. And the reason for the 'new post' is because the first one is to just give an idea of the site. The second plot is to give off a sub-plot that people can come into.

You are definitely welcome I'd say it's definitely a thumbs up worthy, but a first glance doesn't give me enough to go on to have a numerical system.

I can definitely understand the difficulty in filling boards with only yourself haha It is the reason I came to enjoy posting threads with myself. Though I don't technically have to these days, I do find that I often do so just to easily advance my own characters.

Good luck!

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Again, Thank You very Much!

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