Feedback Please =D

[NSX05]

Hey guys,

This took me a good four hours to make, purely by trial and error. It is based off of what it says it is, my phone.

Please provide both good and bad points, areas for improvement and what not.

Thanks!

[ourdoomsdayx]

I myself have an HTC phone Haha.

Overall, very realistic. Having an HTC phone myself almost exactly like this (Eris), the touch options and symbols are familiar and resemble the real ones well. It mimics an HTC style phone exactly. The only thing that I would change is the gloss/glare you created. I think it's a bit too sharp, if you understand what I mean? Also, I think it cuts through the image too much and should not come in so far the the center of the phone. Like, should stay off to that left corner a bit more once it comes closer to the end? It's not a big deal though, just something that caught my eye. However, I would make the background a little more exciting! More buttons, maybe popular apps/menu options, or some cool, abstract background of some sort? To just liven it up a bit more, kind of like a Verizon phone ad if you catch my drift? But I really do like it, I think it looks amazing. I myself have not been able to pull stuff like this off well, but you really did an excellent job!

[NSX05]

Thank you for your kind words, that has cheered me up slightly!

I, myself don't know what Verizon advertisement you are referring to because I live in the UK, and we don't have Verizon here. And also, the shine effect, I could perhaps lower the opacity, and limit it to the size of the screen only, or do you think it looks better as the whole phone?

Dylan

[ourdoomsdayx]

Oh haha, I see your location now. Just ads such as this. I would lower the opacity a bit, but keep it to the whole phone. Like, see how the shine is in this image? I would make it like that, but not taking up so much space on the phone. Just, limited shine.

[NSX05]

I see what you mean now. Thanks for the feedback!