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Post by Ever on Oct 16, 2014 7:59:56 GMT -8
I have made a role playing site base on Little Red Riding Hood, with a mixture of other fairytales that will come into play. The theme was made by DOROTHIA. I would like some input what you like about the site, what you dislike and a suggestion to make it better. Please point out if there is any spelling errors. The site should be done expect for the plot which I have not placed on the site yet. Thank you. Updated: Forgot the link Red as Blood
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Annadog40
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Post by Annadog40 on Oct 16, 2014 9:50:07 GMT -8
I would change the link color the dark red is hard to see
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Ever
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Post by Ever on Oct 16, 2014 10:32:14 GMT -8
Thank you Annadog40. Is there anything you like about the site?
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Post by vectorwoman on Oct 16, 2014 22:14:23 GMT -8
I like the colors layout and originality of the site. The thing that jumped out at me though is I don't see a Title of the thread at the top.
Also I found where it says, "The plot for Red as Blood can be found here. Any update to the plot will also be found inside." Yet I could not find the plot.
It definitely needs a title, maybe with a picture of a wolf.
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MissNK
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Post by MissNK on Oct 16, 2014 23:25:16 GMT -8
LayoutIt doesn't happen often, but I love the layout. It is so smooth and dark, yet not too dark. I also adore the hovers on the board titles. I am not sure if a banner is missing, I think I kinda like it this way. Things I would personally change are the legend on the homepage (just hide it, you don't use it anyway), give the icons (info center and on the boards) a more personal look to fit the theme and get rid of the white ) underneath every board. In the rules-topic I would also make the text justify underneath the red bars for a more clean look. Aside from that I am still drooling over the layout (sorry for the mess ) ContentsFirst: you have a small typo in the Credit-box (Proboards Suppo art instead of Support). I like that the board descriptions are short, it somehow fits your theme and it makes it also easy to find whatever you are searching for. As you have stated the plot is obviously offline, which is a shame, I would like to review it (:. Your rules are okay, the beast guide doesn't also contain anything (yet, I suppose). I think you could add something on the application template about the things you at least want to know from new characters (it is a pretty template, btw). For a starting RP-forum I think you have too many RP-boards. Two or three should do to start with, when you have more members you can make more boards. But that is, of course, just my humble opinion. ConclusionYour layout is definitely beautiful, although I think it still can use some minor improvements. As for the contents: your forum isn't containing really much yet, so it is hard to judge. I am not sure about the things that still are and aren't under construction and as stated in the previous post: I am also missing the forum-name. I would advise you to create already some posts with your own character(s) (at least add their application and perhaps a plot-topic or just a rp-post). It will make your site look less empty and it will give potential members an idea of what to expect (the best example is you, after all). I am sure you will do fine and create a really beautiful forum! I am looking forward for the plot (:
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