Deadly Eyes -Burst Angel- graphic

[Deathnote]

This one I am actually very very proud of. I'm not sure how many layers it is. I do know it is over 15. I got my renders from Planet Renders namely BlackD0 and Crimson.

So yeah like I said I'm very proud of it so yeah tell me what you think.

[Anselm]

This is good, and you should be proud of it.

The background is good; the image has been well used and the eyes are at the right opacity and don't detract from the focus. There is a definite grunge effect to it too, and the colours used are good. The top right corner is definitely a contrast.

The stock has been well blended and is a definite focal point.

Text and borders: two vital parts but they need some improvement here. The border would be much better at 1px while there is too much text here. The BurstAngel text is fine, but make it a little smaller. I don't suggest using the Deadly Eyes text though; it seems to take away from the focus a bit.

Good job.

[Shine]

Yah, its good but maybe darken the edges with a black gradient set to overlay to really focus on the center. The eyes in the bg are cool but maybe duplicate the render, cut out the iris, and set it to grainmerge? It might bring out the eyes more and give it a cool effect, idk.

[Deathnote]

Anselm: Why are you looking at the one in my signature but yeah. I might remove either " Deadly Eyes " or " Burst Angel " I havn't decided. And I'll do a v2 with a 1 px border.

.shnb : No. I don't do cuts. I tried once and I cut myself. But it does sound like an idea. I'll try to cut them out.

[Shine]

genisk02 said:

Anselm: Why are you looking at the one in my signature but yeah. I might remove either " Deadly Eyes " or " Burst Angel " I havn't decided. And I'll do a v2 with a 1 px border.

.shnb : No. I don't do cuts. I tried once and I cut myself. But it does sound like an idea. I'll try to cut them out.

What about just Burst?

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You might have just been able to use the eliptical marquee tool or lasso (idk wat program u use). *shrugs*

[Deathnote]

gambitshinobi said:

genisk02 said:

Anselm: Why are you looking at the one in my signature but yeah. I might remove either " Deadly Eyes " or " Burst Angel " I havn't decided. And I'll do a v2 with a 1 px border.

.shnb : No. I don't do cuts. I tried once and I cut myself. But it does sound like an idea. I'll try to cut them out.

What about just Burst?

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You might have just been able to use the eliptical marquee tool or lasso (idk wat program u use). *shrugs*

Well. Seeing as how Burst Angel is my new username and soon to be gfx name. I could always drop it down to just Angel..