Another web layout

[Anselm]

pbserpent.deviantart.com/#/d2thixe

Ignore the random name if you will comments, critiques, anything?

[dKazn]

Looks nice and simple but I think the blue stuff looks, I dunno how'd you say... sloppy?

[Anselm]

Yeah, I think I should have taken more time with it.

Thanks and good to see you back around

[dude]

Not a huge fan of this compared to the other web designs you've done lately tbh. Serif font doesn't suit the layout for me. The little blob on the main header is quite well done but then it seems like you put a lot less effort into the rest. Menu is a bit tricky to read - I would choose a lighter colour for the menu text and maybe a slightly larger/bolder/capitaler font. The background for the header text also looks rather jaggy - idk how to fix it but I'm sure it doesn't normally look that bad. Hierarchy isn't great either - the menu is just about the last thing you see when you put it over on the right hand side and whilst the copyright doesn't need to be particularly dominant it should probably be a bit more readable. Another thing I just noticed - on the splodges at the bottom of the menu there's a bit of a gradient/shadow going on - really doesn't add anything at all for me.

[Anselm]

Yeah the blobs need more effort I agree, it was 3am and I was half asleep also the reason I didn't change the serif font which clearly doesn't fit in yeah.

Menu I need to generally fix, it's not quite right with regards to fitting in too. And the shadow at the bottom shouldn't be there, I'm just too amateur to do what I want with it

thanks not one of my favs either tbh.

edit: updated. bit better, burn/dodge is pretty bad.