WHY HELLO THERE.

[Shine]

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decided I'd give it a shot as well. as;dklfjasldk rusty.

edit: uploaded with a weird poor quality so displayed above is the fixed? version. link is to the old one. meh.

[Kami]

r that smudging? If so, sex. =D good depth, too. love the b&w.
text takes away a bit from the focal, mebbe? also a bit too busy, the smudge is a bit far and distracts.

but not as rusty as you think. =P

[Shine]

yes it r my classic smudge technique. everything there besides the dude + the text = smudge.

and it was way crazier before i toned it down lol. xD but yeah still a little too much all over the place.

[dude]

Agree with kamo - too messy and distracting from the focal point. I also prefer the unsharpened version - bit too jaggy with the bonus sharpen. Text is quite nice but I don't massively agree with the positioning - I'd move it across a little bit and then hide some of it behind the swirly bits/the bloke in the middle so that it actually feels like it has a position in the 3d world. Black and white works well here and the smudging is good if a little messy and lacking direction as I said earlier. Not a bad effort given rust though.

[Kami]

Jul 28, 2010 16:54:11 GMT -8 Shine said:

yes it r my classic smudge technique. everything there besides the dude + the text = smudge.

and it was way crazier before i toned it down lol. xD but yeah still a little too much all over the place.

your smudging is sexy. /jealous.