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Post by lparker on Aug 7, 2010 7:18:27 GMT -8
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Post by Shine on Aug 9, 2010 5:09:53 GMT -8
4th is good, besides the fact you went with the easy way out on the lighting (white soft brush). Other than that, keep working towards stuff like the 4th. The rest are all a little meh.
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Post by lparker on Aug 9, 2010 7:38:11 GMT -8
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Post by lparker on Aug 12, 2010 7:34:09 GMT -8
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Post by lparker on Aug 16, 2010 19:15:27 GMT -8
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Post by dude on Aug 17, 2010 6:47:46 GMT -8
Was going to reply to this. Honest. I like the 2nd and 4th - not a huge fan of the others. I'll just criticise those two since essentially the things that are wrong with the others are the things that I like about those two. Focal point is very good on both of them - good use of dof and lighting to bring that out. The splatters/c4ds work really well on the second and I like how you've weaved them between her arms - adds to the sense of depth nicely. Contrast is also good on both. My criticisms are that they're both a little monotonous - the second is very washed out and the fourth could maybe do with a slightly wider range of colours. Having said the lighting is good, I think it's perhaps a little strong on the fourth - doesn't really match the level of lighting that you can actually see on the character. The render you used for the fourth isn't perfect so I'd suggest you could probably have cleaned up the edges a little. I think you could also add a bit more in the foreground in front of the character to that one to add to the depth that you did so nicely in the second. They're both very good though - some of the best I feel I've seen from you.
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Post by lparker on Aug 17, 2010 9:12:06 GMT -8
dude! Haven't seen you around in ages, I'm trying to get back into designing atm. Thanks a lot for the comments, I have to say that I completely agree but I'm surprised you like the second one, I hate it lol, thanks a lot |
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Post by VvaderV on Aug 19, 2010 5:05:00 GMT -8
Hi mate, long time no speak, havnt been on here in ages, yeah I quite like the second one too. Remember the forum i designed the banners for years ago what was it called again?
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