make my baby

[elli]

Did I do okaaayyyy?

[Kami]

i think the bit on the left is a little distracting, and the text seems out of place in relation to the focal. The shoulder on the right seems a bit oversharpened, but i'm liking the focal point with the lighting and the whatnot. the c4d's i don't see as serving any real purpose other than bg filler, so i'm a little torn regarding that.

tl;dr i suppose is to work a bit more on depth & text placement. =D

[elli]

Glad I did the lighting and focal right this time. So I changed the left piece and blurred the right shoulder. The only thing I couldn't get was the text. I moved it around and around and the only place it seemed to fit for me was right by the hand. ;_; I can tell it's out of place, I just don't know where else it could go. Suggestions? D:

Yup, the c4d is just a filler. There's a guy with a gun behind it that was bugging me. I also just wanted to see if I could put one in and have it blend.

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Updated. ^

[Kami]

better imo. the hand looks a tad oversharpened at the edges, but not horribly so. the text is still a bit off - the focal (for me at least) is closer to iron man's face, and i think text would've been more of an addition closer to it, mebbe on the other side of the hand.

[Shine]

text is ugly. Colors are good. DOF is kinda ridonk, for ex. why is his arm blurry but his hand is not when they are essentially on the same plane? Overall composition seems kinda out of place. as a general rule of thumb, people will subconciously go to a figure's head as the focal of an image, so you should work your composition around that. in this case, you've chopped his head in half. its a little boring, to boot.

Dont get me wrong mate, this is loads better than some of the stuff i've seen, but there is room for improvement. sorry for bein so critical :c