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[loverboiv3]

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first type of art work like this i have done, how is it?

[elli]

Please tell me that isn't Comic Sans. ]:

[loverboiv3]

honestly no idea on that i was extrememly tired so i rushed it heh but how is the img overall?

[Kami]

well, the font really takes away from it. :[ other than that, it's interesting, but it looks very much like there wasn't much thought to overall composition. the styles are varying -- you have vector brushes on the left, a stock image as the intended 'focal', then a fractal on the right, so it's not very cohesive. i also know the person is supposed to be the focal point, but it really isn't since the fractal on the right is so massive.

it really is an interesting concept, BUT if you're going to do typography art, you can't tell us to ignore the font. =P

[loverboiv3]

i never said ignore the font =P i simply said i was in a rush and was asking how it was overall ^_^ no ignoring in there hahaha

[Kami]

fair doos. :3 it's definitely an interesting concept, and i'm a huge fan of typography, so keep at it. you definitely have a good eye for the basics, it just needs some refining. :3 also, try dafont.com for some sexxxyyyyy fonts. =P

[loverboiv3]

ok my biggest messup besides font in this is i left the girls midtones in the picture behind the words xD woopsies hahaha and tyvm! first time doing a peice like this so its great for learning with some criticism