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Post by Fox. on Oct 8, 2012 16:23:28 GMT -8
mockingjay.freeforums.net/index.cgiJust the general advice and constructive criticism to go with it. I had to get help making the Banner, but they left me to do the "Mockingjay" adds and so on. (I'm still very novice at making graphics.)
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Post by Anselm on Oct 10, 2012 2:43:55 GMT -8
My main concern with the banner as it is right now is that the "Mockingjay" text goes over the icon, which doesn't seem right. I'd also change the font of the "here comes the" text, just keep it simple. The bottom text is a good font but I think needs less of an anti-alias on it - needs to be sharper.
I like the colour scheme, works nicely with the background. You need to fix the head/base images though...
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Post by Fox. on Oct 13, 2012 6:30:15 GMT -8
Sorry for not getting back until now, was busy with school and stuff. Anyway!
I'm not sure I understand your last comment:
"less of an anti-alias"?
As to the rest, I've added a new Banner that doesn't cover the icon and am making new head/base images that actually work.
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Post by Anselm on Oct 17, 2012 13:41:42 GMT -8
Yeah, that last line doesn't make sense.
I prefer the new banner a lot. One thing I'd do is change the cell highlight colour, make it closer to that grey.
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Post by Fox. on Oct 20, 2012 15:56:20 GMT -8
Thanks Anselm.
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Post by Ninjacorn on Oct 29, 2012 14:57:02 GMT -8
Usually the HG forums I see are pretty beginner and almost too basic because they're mostly people that don't know much coding but love the series, but yours looks professional, which is something that's pretty important to me!
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