New Style I'm Playing With...

[Ash]

Right after browsing a few forums I've noticed this rather 'new' style, that fills the whole canvas with basically all sorts. I know the theme is kind of random considering the render is Steven Gerrard, however disregard that and concentrate on the background. Does the vector look good? maybe too busy?....

Opinions please

[:K3Z:]

personally, the flowers kill it...

i love the sig.. the background is awesome... but id like to see it without the flowers

[Ash]

Yeah, I wasn't too sure about the flowers, however with nothing on the left side it looked pretty plain.

How about this?

Without


EDIT: OR hey, maybe just slicing the sig?

[dKazn]

Yea, I agree with Kez. the flowers do kill it, but maybe if I see it without flowers, I see can what's better imo, but it doesn't look busy to me.

EDIT: Maybe a bit less flowers instead of taking them all out imo.
EDIT2: Or add some of those splatter effects I see on the right, on the left.

[:K3Z:]

asho said:

EDIT: OR hey, maybe just slicing the sig?

<3 perfection

[dKazn]

Oh yeah, slicing it is much better. =)

[Ash]

Yeh, looks good IMO, but maybe a tad too small. Ahhh well, best keep with it. Thanks

[dKazn]

asho said:

Yeh, looks good IMO, but maybe a tad too small. Ahhh well, best keep with it. Thanks

No problem. Keep it up. =D

[:K3Z:]

asho said:

Yeh, looks good IMO, but maybe a tad too small. Ahhh well, best keep with it. Thanks

not really.. your just off average.

but your touch is definatley coming back, keep at it

[ircrazyd]

Well, I like it, but I think there are some things to improved on.

For one, I think you should remove that outerglow on the border. It looks a bit odd.

Second I think you should blur the second guy, as I'm assuming the guy pointing is the focal point.

Nicely done overall.

[endless22]

The sliced one is great, I see no problems with it. Even thought, the flowers weren't that bad, I think it's fine. Pretty good. =D

[:K3Z:]

ircrazyd said:

Well, I like it, but I think there are some things to improved on.

For one, I think you should remove that outerglow on the border. It looks a bit odd.

Second I think you should blur the second guy, as I'm assuming the guy pointing is the focal point.

Nicely done overall.

the guy pointing is Stevie G, of course he's the focal point

[Ash]

Thanks for the feedback people.

Kez, I was actually talking to Ron then, about maybe starting my own blog up. One issue I'd talk about is maybe walking through my progress in finding that touch again. I've not designed anything personal in months that I'm happy with- so I thought it'd be interesting. Hey, I know I'm not anything special, but still, it may inspire people. Opinions?

[ircrazyd]

kez2cat said:

ircrazyd said:

Well, I like it, but I think there are some things to improved on.

For one, I think you should remove that outerglow on the border. It looks a bit odd.

Second I think you should blur the second guy, as I'm assuming the guy pointing is the focal point.

Nicely done overall.

the guy pointing is Stevie G, of course he's the focal point

Clever.

[`?v?`]

If you tAKE the flowers out then you should make it like splatter, If not then just crop those dots off the background a little. But I really like the sig. It cam out very good. Good job Ashy