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Grimm
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Post by Grimm on Feb 20, 2007 13:38:58 GMT -8
Any rates or rants will be much appriacted lol
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Post by Anselm on Feb 20, 2007 13:48:11 GMT -8
It's a good start, but could take improvement. The general idea of the signature is good. The cracked background looks good. The stock is also well blended, but I think one person would be better than two. The colouring: it's monotonic at the moment. I suggest either using a gradient or using several colours from the stocks. I have a technique to do that I can show you if you want. Text is a good font yes, but try using the top corner. Good job, and good luck
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Grimm
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Wars come and go, but my soldiers stay eternal
Posts: 78
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Oct 14, 2007 11:13:37 GMT -8
Grimm
Wars come and go, but my soldiers stay eternal
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February 2007
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Post by Grimm on Feb 20, 2007 13:51:47 GMT -8
Ok thanks for that I will keep that in mind anyway I just made this one aswell so while you here could you give me your thoughts on this one and by the way the sig above the 2 people thats whole 1 stock lol Anyway the one I just made is below
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Post by Anselm on Feb 20, 2007 13:55:06 GMT -8
Again, you've done a good job on the cracked background but the stocks take up too much of the signature, giving no real focus. Try just using the single stock. As I said before, you should using a multicolouring. This is quite dull also; you might want to use a curves layer to brighten it up. The text: try sharpening it a bit. Add a 1px black border to give it a definite edge. I prefer the first one, keep trying and you'll get there in the end
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