A sig I made. Improvements?

[$hØ©Këyë]

I'll like some improvements for this sig I made. Nice detailed rates are needed, no "nice" or "I think you should put more color in" stuff like that.

Thanks

[Rezistik]

the text is too large it detracts from the focal point. the whole sig is too large the neg space on this sides is weird maybe add some filters and effects some smudging would really help this sig. also the stock looks really low quality which can kill a sig

[$hØ©Këyë]

Thanks for that rate. It's just I'm just learning to code, not to design. But I do have a intrest in it.

Thanks anyway

[Anselm]

It's nice.



No, just kidding. It's a good start but could do with improvement.

The stock is a good one, but you need to use it better. Add some effects to it, smudge the border, work with it. At the moment, it fades into nothing also on the sides. Try to add something there, or as I said before, scrap the fade and do something else.

I'm really not digging the text here. Both font and colour don't work very well. I find that Sans Serif fonts, eg Arial, work much better than fancy fonts like what you've used. Also, the red text doesn't look good - use something similar to what you have; work with it and the eyedropper/greyscale colours.

Add a border - 1px in black will be fine. That gives a definite edge to the signature.

Good luck improving it.

[Rezistik]

for fonts on this one id suggest a bjork youll find it at dafont.com

sorry for a short post but i just now thought about it

[$hØ©Këyë]

Oh thanks but really, I seem to have got addicted to the Blackadder font

Don't worry about short posts, I don't care if anyone rates shortly. If they do that, they'll suppose they'll improve

[Anselm]

Don't get addicted to fonts mate
Doesn't work out in the end, usually. Mix and match, find a font that works well with the signature.