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84958
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Jun 14, 2016 13:45:49 GMT -8
Shine
shin n. 1) a device used for finding furniture in the dark
6,497
July 2006
gambitshinobi
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Guitar
Feb 25, 2007 20:33:54 GMT -8
Post by Shine on Feb 25, 2007 20:33:54 GMT -8
Definetly not as good as my last one, but I think its decent. ![]() |
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Rwy'n hoffi coffi
49511
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Mar 4, 2021 21:41:56 GMT -8
Anselm
boom
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July 2005
transfermktforum
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Guitar
Feb 26, 2007 12:29:03 GMT -8
Post by Anselm on Feb 26, 2007 12:29:03 GMT -8
It's decent. I like the general idea; you just haven't finished it off. The guitar is well used and the lens flare seems quite good. The black space also seems fine. It just doesn't look "finished", and it's hard for me to explain how to "finish" it.  The text needs definite improvement true; work with the colours you have already. Good job  |
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84958
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Jun 14, 2016 13:45:49 GMT -8
Shine
shin n. 1) a device used for finding furniture in the dark
6,497
July 2006
gambitshinobi
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Guitar
Feb 26, 2007 17:21:55 GMT -8
Post by Shine on Feb 26, 2007 17:21:55 GMT -8
Alright. I'll try messing around with text. Not sure how it could be "finished". *pulls hair out in frustration* Oh well.
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92191
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Nov 24, 2008 19:41:43 GMT -8
Aussie
Live Life To The Fullest You Only Get One Lap To Make It Great
1,597
November 2006
aussie1991
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Guitar
Feb 27, 2007 4:25:36 GMT -8
Post by Aussie on Feb 27, 2007 4:25:36 GMT -8
Its very good and personally i think its better than your last one however. I think the lens flare is too bright and the hand is to transparent. And the text well.......... its a bit plain.
However Great Work!
~Aussie~
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The text needs definite improvement true; work with the colours you have already.
