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Post by ashy on Feb 28, 2007 5:27:29 GMT -8
Comments please ;D
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Post by Anselm on Feb 28, 2007 9:10:26 GMT -8
Having 2 Ashes confuses me. Your signature: I'm liking the cloud effect in the background and it matches the stock. Not sure about the white in the middle though; it seems too much of a contrast tbh. The stock is well blended and there's a definite flow here, but it's not the definite focal point. Try adding a bit of lighting behind it. The text looks good; don't really have a comment there. Do add a border though: that gives the signature a definite boundary. Oh, and the white in the bottom left corner looks a little strange. Good job
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shin n. 1) a device used for finding furniture in the dark
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Post by Shine on Feb 28, 2007 19:41:11 GMT -8
Having 2 Ashes confuses me. Well, ones a new member and the others a veteran (i think). Anyways,... The background has a grungey feel and looks good. The white part could be less bright. I'm assuming its ice stuff the guy is holding but maybe make it more blue than white. The render could be a bit more blended into the background and slightly brighter. Just duplicate the render and put it on overlay or just play around with the layer styles. Text seems a bit overdone and I don't like the placement too much. Perhaps on the other side to take up some of the (semi)-negative space. Also, maybe just a solid white or black would be fine and the icicle like things are ok, but maybe too long. Like Anselm said, add a border and the white splotch in the left-bottom corner seems out of place and very sharp.
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ashy
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Mar 28, 2007 2:47:23 GMT -8
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Post by ashy on Mar 1, 2007 3:08:18 GMT -8
Thanks for the comments guys, and yeah i wanted Ash because i use that for liquid GFX but yeah thanks for the indepth replies and good feedback very helpful, will be getting more up soon :-P
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Post by `?v?` on Mar 1, 2007 13:42:46 GMT -8
Having 2 Ashes confuses me. Well, ones a new member and the others a veteran (i think). Anyways,... The background has a grungey feel and looks good. The white part could be less bright. I'm assuming its ice stuff the guy is holding but maybe make it more blue than white. The render could be a bit more blended into the background and slightly brighter. Just duplicate the render and put it on overlay or just play around with the layer styles. Text seems a bit overdone and I don't like the placement too much. Perhaps on the other side to take up some of the (semi)-negative space. Also, maybe just a solid white or black would be fine and the icicle like things are ok, but maybe too long. Like Anselm said, add a border and the white splotch in the left-bottom corner seems out of place and very sharp. ye a veteran and former staff I think you should add a border to the sub zero one and it woud look better
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Post by Ash on Mar 2, 2007 11:48:43 GMT -8
Someone called? ;D
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