New Technique- C&C Please

[Arka Myyth]

Okay, so I started just messing around in CS a little, and my end result is below:




C&C please?

[Anselm]

That's pretty good, but it's very busy.

I like the general idea and the colours used here. You've kept to the theme with the flames too.

It's too busy though. There is no real focus here and I can see what you want to make the focal point (I think) but you need to emphasise it a little more.

The text is quite good; doesn't take away from the signature.

Good job

[Arka Myyth]

Thank you Anselm. Like I said, I just started screwing around. I suppose it is pretty busy, with all of the skulls everywhere.... Hmmm....

Okay, thank you very much. I will try and work o nthat for my next sig.

[Anselm]

Try to make one skull stand out, and the others just fade out. Make sure you keep the style right though. Good luck with it