Grimm
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Wars come and go, but my soldiers stay eternal
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Post by Grimm on Mar 1, 2007 14:29:18 GMT -8
I think its my best... Any rates or rants?
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Post by iDunk on Mar 1, 2007 14:58:27 GMT -8
Wow. ;D Great work! I love the scan lines, and your choice for render.
-Computerpros
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Post by Jormogundr on Mar 1, 2007 15:01:51 GMT -8
I love it.
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Rekkin
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Post by Rekkin on Mar 1, 2007 15:38:31 GMT -8
It's good, but try to set the opacity of the scan lines a little less - they kind of detract from the overall image. Also, I would advise not putting the scan lines over your render, as it makes the whole sig seem 'flat', instead of having something as a focus, and things in the background.
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Grimm
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Post by Grimm on Mar 2, 2007 12:19:46 GMT -8
Ok cool thanks for the comments and Rekkin I will keep that in mind on my next sig
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Post by Anselm on Mar 2, 2007 14:07:53 GMT -8
I love it. Try to add a few comments about what you like, what can be improved and a general comment. This'll help a designer improve. Thanks
I like the general idea, and it's the best of what I've seen from you. The background has the right amount of brushing and doesn't take away from the stock. The stock has been used well and seems to flow into the background. The colours used are good too. Improve the text a bit, try to make it a little bigger. Scanlines - they do take away from the signature. Lighten them to about 15% opacity - usually works for me. Good job By the way, try to experiment with more than just brushing. It'll improve your work to no end
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