Grimm
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Grimm
Wars come and go, but my soldiers stay eternal
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Post by Grimm on Mar 2, 2007 13:18:18 GMT -8
![]() Lol any rates? |
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Anselm
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Post by Anselm on Mar 2, 2007 13:54:31 GMT -8
Needs work.  The general idea is good, but it hasn't been finished off well. The background is too busy; do more than just brushing and make the stock stand out more. It seems to be very monotonic; try to use multicolouring: this should also make the stock stand out, but make sure it all flows, try to blur it in if you want to. The text could stand out a little more, but seems OK if you want to keep it like that. Good job |
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