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What ya think?

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[Fenrisulfr]

If that's your first go it is very good. I must point out though that the scan lines or whatever they are take away the image from focus and they are generally a bit too opaque, make them more transparent or take them away. I know you're probably saying look who's talking, but I reckon it would look better.

[Anselm]

Bumping is every 24 hours, not 18

This does need some work. A good start, it just needs finishing.

Work on the background. The fractal currently makes it too busy. Try lowering its opacity, or bring out the stock more. The colouring - it's monotonic. Try to make the stock flow but stand out; multi-colouring can do this.

You've overused scanlines, and they seem to take away from the piece. I suggest removing them. Also, the bar needs a lower opacity so it doesn't take away from the piece.

The border - Extend the signature to the side and add a 1px border. It will work better.

Work on the text. It isn't that easy to see.

Good luck

[Shine]

Like Umaril said, the scan lines detract from it. Take em' out. The background needs some contrast. It doesn't look very good all blue. Same with the render. Also, try blending the render into the background. Besides that, the background doesn't match the render. Maybe a more grunge-ish style would work. The dark bar in the center seems out of place and the text (?) over it in that pixel font is un-readable. If that isn't text ignore my last sentence 8P. However, those black dots don't look too good so i'd take them out. The "Fate" text is in a fairly plain font... maybe something more exciting would be good.

[Fenrisulfr]

Yes, a heavier font would definately work better as the current one is hard to see.